Hero
Does the first screen say what you do and who it's for?
Problem
Do you name the pain your customer already feels?
Plan
Is the path to working with you obvious?
CTA
Is there one clear next step on every page?
Photos
Do real people show up, or only stock and buildings?
Proof
Do reviews and results back up the claims?
4 audits published
The Pink Bride
Bridal show organizer across Tennessee and Alabama. Beautiful photography, but the hero never says it's a show.
“The Pink Bride runs bridal shows in Tennessee and Alabama. Their hero photo is stunning — a real couple, real flowers, beautiful light. But I spent two minutes on the site this morning and still wasn't sure it was a bridal show. That's the audit.”
23/60 · 2026-06-29
StoryBrand / Business Made Simple
Donald Miller's messaging framework company. The hero is strong. The nav reveals a product sprawl problem underneath it.
“StoryBrand teaches businesses to clarify their message. Their homepage headline is strong. Donald Miller's face is right there. But I want to show you what happens the moment you look at their navigation — because that's where the framework breaks down on their own site.”
38/60 · 2026-06-29
The Knot
The dominant wedding vendor marketplace. Headline is vague, no couple photo in hero, sign-up form above the fold before you know why to sign up.
“The Knot has helped 25 million couples plan their wedding. Their hero image is confetti emojis on a cream background. I want to walk through their homepage with you — because what a platform this size gets wrong tells every local wedding vendor exactly what to get right.”
19/60 · 2026-06-29
Dave Ramsey / Ramsey Solutions
Personal finance brand built on one man's story. Hero headline is aspiration, not problem. Eight equal tile choices where there should be one path.
“Dave Ramsey's homepage headline is 'Live Like No One Else' — no face, no button, no problem named. Then eight identical tiles for eight different things. I audited it through the Plainspoken Blueprint this morning and I want to show you what the most famous personal finance brand in America is getting wrong on its own homepage.”
22/60 · 2026-06-29
Audits reflect the site at the time of review. They're meant to show patterns — not to pass final judgment on a brand.
Questions? Email matt@gatherstudio.app